This week at school we have been learning about thening you could do to make peaple smile
here is an asuple :
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
This week at school we have been learning about thening you could do to make peaple smile
here is an asuple :
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Ainsley,
ReplyDeleteGreat job this week I love the vine you made. My favourite message is be grateful because there a lot more people that have less stuff than us. Next time maybe you could add some more writing and make sure you check your spelling but other than that great job
Keep up the good work!!
Zoe
Kia Ora Ainsley,
ReplyDeleteYou blog post this week was really good! Great Job! Maybe next time you could change the color of the writing on your poster so it makes it easier to read but other than that you did a really good job on this blog post.
Keep up the awesome work!
Ari
Kia ora Ainsley,
ReplyDeleteGood job this week! My favourite one is be helpful. Maybe next time you could add in a question.
Ava