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Friday, May 21, 2021

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 We are learning to explain sentences by adding detail.


Oscar cried.

When: a few days ago at 12:30 am 

Where: at school 

Why: because kimmy the crook 


At 12:30 am ocar cried  in the classroom because 

He was getting bulled by kimmy the crook the 



They had an argument.

When: four days ago at 1:23 pm 

Where: at school 

Why: because he had a argument with his best friend jack 



When ben and jack had an argument. ben cried at 1:23 pm 

At school on a friday. 

 
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 24, 2021 at 12:02 PM

    Kia ora Ainsley,
    this is a really good blog, well done! Maybe next time add a question.
    Ava

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  2. AnonymousAugust 25, 2021 at 11:30 AM

    Kia Ora Ainsley,
    Your blog post this week was very good. Maybe next time you could add a question at the end and maybe next time you could also write a little bit more about your work but other than that you did a awesome job.
    Keep up the great work!
    Ari

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