hi bloggers to day i will be showing you my writing this week we had to pick a topic my topic was how to care for your dog i think i have some good ideas.
here is my work ....
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
hi bloggers to day i will be showing you my writing this week we had to pick a topic my topic was how to care for your dog i think i have some good ideas.
here is my work ....
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Ainsley,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your work.
Mabey next time you could put your goal.
Dont forget to do capitil I's.
Keep up the great work,
Madison
Kia ora Ainsley
ReplyDeletei Love how you and i have learned some new things.
Next time you could add your goal
keep up the amazing work
Mikayla
Kia Ora Ainsley,
ReplyDeleteWOW it is a great post about your ways to care for a dog. My favourite way is to make sure that you play with them and take them for walks. maybe next time you could add your goal.
keep up the good work!!!
Zoe